Novel excerpt – hot off the press!!!

Here’s an excerpt from my novel in progress. Let me know what you think, I’d appreciate any feedback!!!! The basic storyline centres around the people trafficking industry in Europe, France in particular. A young English couple (brother & sister in their late teens/early twenties) are abducted soon after making the acquaintance of an American couple on a train in rural France (also a brother and sister and of similar ages). Tenuously held notions of romance are soon tested and the situation thrown into chaos… read more →